Change of story line

My group and I have decided to change our story line, as we felt that our previus sotry line wasn't believable and was starting to look nothing like a horror film. This encouraged us to think about changing the way in which the stories portrayed.


We have decided to exclude Ben (Ambrose) and Bel as too many people in the house didn't convey the horror theme correctly. We have decided to keep the killer (George) as he fits the build of a stereotypical killer, Emma will also still keep the main leeding role of the vulnrable teenage girl. We hope this will improve our footage and provide us with a believable story. The setting will still be the same, in a house, mainly in (Emma's) bedroom, and also the outside of the house.


The new story line consists of; Emma asleep in the bedroom but then she hears noises and becomes weary and frightned. Emma will walk into the bathroom and splash her face with water, she will look up and see there is a death threat on the bathroom mirror (Emma SCREAMS). The camera circles the whole room to show that there is no killer to be seen. The killer will then appear in the bathroom behind Emma. Emma will then run back into the bedroom, the killer then chases after Emma holding a knife to her. Emma will scream and wake up, realising that it was a dream.


There will be little talking (screaming), towards the end of the two minutes, as the killer will show up right at the end.  My group and I haven't planned as far as what will be said but will decide when we are next filming.


We are planning on filming tomorrow (Friday 4th March).